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Year 5 English

Persuasive Writing

Learn how to convince your reader using strong arguments, persuasive techniques, and the OREO framework.

Structure of Persuasive Writing

Persuasive writing aims to convince the reader to agree with your point of view. A well-structured persuasive text has three clear parts:

1

Introduction

  • • Hook the reader's attention
  • • Introduce the topic
  • • State your opinion clearly (thesis)
2

Arguments

  • • Each paragraph = one argument
  • • Support with evidence
  • • Use persuasive techniques
  • • Address counter-arguments
3

Conclusion

  • • Restate your opinion
  • • Summarise strongest points
  • • Call to action

Persuasive Techniques

Persuasive writers use special techniques to make their arguments more convincing. Here are the most important ones:

Emotive Language

Words chosen to make the reader feel a strong emotion (anger, sympathy, fear, hope).

Weak: "Some animals are hurt."
Strong: "Innocent, defenceless animals are suffering every day."

Rhetorical Questions

Questions that do not need an answer — they make the reader think and usually agree with you.

"Don't our children deserve a safe place to play?"

Facts and Statistics

Using numbers and proven facts makes your argument seem well-researched and trustworthy.

"According to recent studies, 78% of students feel happier when they have access to outdoor play areas."

Rule of Three

Listing three things together makes your point sound complete and memorable.

"It is unfair, unkind, and completely unacceptable."

Direct Address

Using "you" speaks directly to the reader, making it feel personal.

"You have the power to make a difference."

The OREO Framework

OREO is a simple way to structure each persuasive paragraph. Think of it like the layers of an Oreo biscuit:

O

Opinion

State your opinion clearly.

"I strongly believe that every school should have a vegetable garden."

R

Reason

Give a reason that supports your opinion.

"This is important because growing vegetables teaches children about healthy eating and where food comes from."

E

Example / Evidence

Provide an example or fact to back up your reason.

"For instance, Greenfield Primary School started a garden in 2023, and 85% of students said they tried new vegetables as a result."

O

Opinion (restated)

Repeat your opinion in different words to reinforce your point.

"Clearly, school gardens are a valuable addition to every school."

Annotated Persuasive Text

Topic: "Should children have more break time at school?" — Notice the techniques used.

INTRODUCTION

Don't all children deserve time to run, play, and simply be children? At many schools, break time has been shortened to make room for more lessons. I firmly believe that children should have more break time, as it improves their health, focus, and happiness.

Rhetorical question Background Opinion (thesis)
ARGUMENT 1

Firstly, more break time leads to better concentration in class. When children sit for long periods without a break, they become restless and find it harder to focus. Research by the University of Queensland found that students who had regular 15-minute breaks scored 20% higher on focus tests. Surely, we should be giving our children every opportunity to succeed.

Opinion Reason Evidence (statistic) Emotive language
CONCLUSION

In conclusion, it is clear that children need and deserve more time to play during the school day. Longer breaks improve focus, physical health, and emotional wellbeing. It is time for schools to take action and put children's wellbeing first.

Restated opinion Summary Call to action

Key Vocabulary

Persuade

To convince someone to agree with your point of view or take action.

Emotive Language

Words deliberately chosen to make the reader feel a particular emotion.

Rhetorical Question

A question asked for effect that does not need an answer.

Thesis / Opinion Statement

A clear sentence that states the writer's main argument or position.

Counter-argument

The opposing point of view, which a strong writer acknowledges and then argues against.

Call to Action

A statement that tells the reader what they should do next.

Knowledge Check

Test your understanding of persuasive writing. Select the correct answer and click "Check Answer".

Question 1

Which of the following is an example of emotive language?

Question 2

What does the "R" in the OREO framework stand for?

Question 3

Which sentence is a rhetorical question?

Question 4

Which of these is the strongest argument for banning plastic bags?

Question 5

What persuasive technique is used in: "It is dangerous, damaging, and disgraceful."?

Key Concepts Summary

Year 5: Complex Sentences Year 5: Reading Comprehension